Colored Version

Okay, so.. yep. Wow, this is so poorly done. And my markers are too big to color in the details. lol. but it's okay. It's my first time using these markers.. >.< So it's blotchy here and there.. Remind me next time to DRAW BIGGER!!! lol

So I'm gunna ask for you guys to tell me anything that I need to work on and any advise you guys can give. that'd be great. :3

Oh, but don't say backgrounds. lol. I already know I need to do those.. >.<